Languishing in fields of green
Mind bending daze
Ripples of thought ebb away
Gentle sounds, harsh thoughts
Scatter remembrances across the blue
An overwhelming glow encompasses all
Like the arms of a mother
Warm, comforting, wordless
The Kaleidoscope unfolds
The rainbow is free
Sensuousness of body, of soul
The beauty is blinding
Shielding reality
The awakening inevitable but slow
And then suddenly
There's nowhere to go.
Mind bending daze
Ripples of thought ebb away
Gentle sounds, harsh thoughts
Scatter remembrances across the blue
An overwhelming glow encompasses all
Like the arms of a mother
Warm, comforting, wordless
The Kaleidoscope unfolds
The rainbow is free
Sensuousness of body, of soul
The beauty is blinding
Shielding reality
The awakening inevitable but slow
And then suddenly
There's nowhere to go.
7 comments:
Death...
The first word that sprang to mind when I read this.
Soft, peaceful, eternal...
It was water for me..fluid..
BUT sigh sigh sigh..he returns to the font,
jeez. i guess i'm lower down in the evolutionary pond. i was thinking...hmmm... chicken biriyani and how those things are never eternal. dude. come off it.
Hehehe...As much as I appreciate the interpretations, it was about smoking some reefer...:)
@therapy- I was sitting by a lake when I wrote it...:D
And I haven't changed the font at any point...Browsers do some strange things sometimes...But now I will change it so tell me if you see the following posts.
really liked the poem..the picture sort of changed the tone of it for me though and made me :-(
The photo doesn't match the poem? Or is it just the photo itself that made you sad?
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